I'll start this review by saying that you're just 11 years old, so there's alot of time to improve!
- There was no colour. Now you say that it was on purpose, but colour always makes the animation feel more "alive".
- The animation itself was okay, but you should use more FBF, so it looks less "stiff".
I hope you improve!
...changed mai laif. thx
Haters gonna hate
The voice acting is top-notch :D
the credz song...
..I have it on my iPod now.
As Budge said...
...the story, voice-acting, artwork, and the great background art made this top-notch. I just can't figure out why this didn't get at least a daily 5th.
I had to pay the great Speakonia to do those amazing voices.
I love the visual style! The story is very simple and cute.
Also, did you make the noises from the monster by yourself?
Nah I didn't do the noises. I had my friend Noah come in and do some vocies
Some music would've been nice, and I thought it was a little too short.
And the replay button didn't work for me.
After this long time, we've finally finished it. And with great succes!
Everything was great!
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